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Daily Deviation

February 7, 2014
Ice by Astrikos
Featured by inknalcohol
Suggested by TheGalleryOfEve
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When the glacier slides, 
I'm the one
. . .
    
 
lost. 

Wondering where the right path is, with doubt biting. Frozen memories, icy distances. 

When the world grows colder, 
I'm the one
. . . 

cracked. 
Standing on my own, with the past craving for me. Stolen, missing. 

When the snow falls, 
I'm the one
. . . 

drifting. 
Trying my best, to make sense of it all. Wandering, wondering.

When the hail storms, 
I'm the one
. . . 

walking. 
Holding my guard, locking my heart. Smiling, pretending. 


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Congratulations on the DD :) While preferences differ (mine usually does) on the choice, I have no doubt here. This is quite the amazing piece, written in a natural yet experimental way which you were able to pull off really well :)