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twenty.two by petits-bonheurs

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Lovely colors and contrast here, I love the composition too.
The sharpness and detail are lovely, however, the piece is a bit soft, and I think that a bit of sharpening would be good.

The depth of field is good, but the softness towards the back is slightly distracting from the rest of this gorgeous piece.

I also think you could crop out the left slightly. This would center the piece more.

I really love that shade of blue and the feathers. A really nice touch there.

Well done, keep up the good work.

:hug: It's a lovely flower indeed. c:
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petits-bonheurs Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you so much for your lovely critique! You're actually the first to use the critique feature on one of my photos - yay!!! :D

I'll definitely take your advice and apply it to the next photo I take, maybe even making edits to this one again :heart:

Thank you so much again, I really appreciate the time you took to critique my piece!
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Astrikos Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012   General Artist
:heart: My pleasure!
:la:

Aw glad I could help!
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petits-bonheurs Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
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Astrikos Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012   General Artist
:w00t:
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