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twenty.two by petits-bonheurs

:iconastrikos:
Lovely colors and contrast here, I love the composition too.
The sharpness and detail are lovely, however, the piece is a bit soft, and I think that a bit of sharpening would be good.

The depth of field is good, but the softness towards the back is slightly distracting from the rest of this gorgeous piece.

I also think you could crop out the left slightly. This would center the piece more.

I really love that shade of blue and the feathers. A really nice touch there.

Well done, keep up the good work.

:hug: It's a lovely flower indeed. c:
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petits-bonheurs Nov 11, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you so much for your lovely critique! You're actually the first to use the critique feature on one of my photos - yay!!! :D

I'll definitely take your advice and apply it to the next photo I take, maybe even making edits to this one again :heart:

Thank you so much again, I really appreciate the time you took to critique my piece!
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Astrikos Nov 11, 2012   General Artist
:heart: My pleasure!
:la:

Aw glad I could help!
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petits-bonheurs Nov 11, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
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Astrikos Nov 11, 2012   General Artist
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